[Checkins] SVN: bluebream/website/docs/v1.0/tutorial1.rst - better wording

[Baiju M]

Log message for revision 108467:
  - better wording
  - Better sub-section title
  

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  U   bluebream/website/docs/v1.0/tutorial1.rst

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Modified: bluebream/website/docs/v1.0/tutorial1.rst
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--- bluebream/website/docs/v1.0/tutorial1.rst	2010-01-25 10:36:55 UTC (rev 108466)
+++ bluebream/website/docs/v1.0/tutorial1.rst	2010-01-25 11:16:56 UTC (rev 108467)
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 collector application.  This will help you to familiarize more
 concepts in BlueBream.
 
-Before proceeding, we will see the user stories:
+These are the important user stories:
 
 1. Individual small ticket collector for each project.  Many
    collectors can be added to one running BlueBream.
@@ -125,8 +125,8 @@
 changing the description.  Because, the name and namespace package
 might be referred from many places.
 
-Fresh package
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+Organize new package
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 If you change directory to ``ticketcollector``, you can see few
 directories and files::
@@ -170,10 +170,10 @@
 
 The next step is building the application using Buildout.  The
 purpose of Buildout is to automate all the process involved in
-building an Python application/package from scratch.  The only basic
+building any Python application/package from scratch.  The only basic
 requirement for Buildout is a Python installation.  Buildout provides
-a bootstrapping script to initialize Buildout.  This bootstrap
-script named ``bootstrap.py`` will do these things:
+a bootstrapping script to initialize Buildout.  This bootstrap script
+named ``bootstrap.py`` will do these things:
 
 - Download and install ``setuptools`` package from PyPI